This game is one of the best that I have played in a while. But come on man, not the heart strings. MC think of Sky more. But in all seriousness this game has been fantastic. The animation is great the storyline is great and I can't wait for the seventh episode. (I started at 9:00 at night and it is now 2:35 in the morning, I got addicted fast.)
Some of the story later on will do more than tug at your heartstrings, it will straight tie them to the back of a racecar and floor it. Few games have actually managed to hit me right in the feels, but this one does a damned good job of it.
Now i know what the problem is. Especially at the beginning his "thoughts" are an exposition dump. And the way all charakters talk, feels very unnatural. I don't know anyone, who talks like that (and thinks like that... but i can't read minds, so who knows ;P). Both these points made him look like a "smart ass". Overanalyzing everything and talking/ giving advice in a very formal manner.
But in episode 2 it get's better, because the amount of exposition is reduced. I'm in Episode 3 now and it gets interesting now.
My suggestions on how to fix these problems (by someone who has never written anything... ;P):
1. Let them talk more casual.
2. Reduce "exposition thoughts". A rule in movies is "show, don't tell". Since this is a "visual" novell, it should be possible. I know, it's more work.
3. When characters are talking to each other, make thoughts shorter. Normal people do not have much time to analyze every detail when talking to someone.
4. Big thinking can happen when a character is alone.
But i will continue reading now, because i'm excited to see what these heartbreaking moments later are.
I hate to say it, but I agree with you. Ep 1-2 or even 3 is pretty much my newbie days, apologies. Will try to fix the early episodes, when I have time. Might do some retouch on the renders while I'm at it.
You're welcome. We have not just the build up, but there will be times where things will go down. All you need to do is trust your girls. It's a slice of life after all.
This games is great... And i noticed that the art styles is kind of similar to the eternum from caribdis :)
Btw this games will be in the second place for the storyline and the art style... The first place goes to once in a lifetime from caribdis not gonna lie :/
yo, can anyone explain to me this trope in visual novels with "roommate" and "landlady"? I'm just reading these novels trying to understand which name I could use & would actually fit these situations the most. Is this some sort of legal thing?
Some games I've seen use "roommate" in place of "sister", and "landlady" in place of "mother" or "stepmother" in order to avoid being tagged as incest or to give players the choice. Most games that do this make sense either way you go, so it's really player preference.
first of all great game, second of all why do you have to tug on me heartstrings. but in all seriousness it's a great game with nice character and it definetly has potential so keep up the good work
It's great game and surprisingly heart warming. I hope it's harem by the end as I have real trouble picking who I love more between Aine, Freya, and Gwen. Really hoping Claire will be an option as well as the virgin warrior princess of my dreams. Really happy the protagonist got his Xiao pull in Genshin Impact too lol.
Hello Niichan! I'm a very big fan of your game! I played this game on the release of the Fifth episode... cuz till then I did not even know this game but I'm glad that I found it cuz the gameplay, story, pics, etc everything is awesome but I'm not able to save any game files in this 6th episode I was able to save files in the 5th episode but not in this 6th episode.
Also, no file is getting auto-saved and I can't see any option of "quick save" in the game but there is a quick save category in the game save menu and when I try to save, it just automatically gets closed and I have to start from the beginning so pls help me with this problem
P.S., I can't wait for the next episode and I'm so addicted to the game that I get mad (not in a bad way) that I have to play this game part by part and I was thinking that I will download the game when it is completed but it's just too irresistible.
Hello Niichan! Im a big fan of your work... I played this game on the release of the First episode... I stopped at the third and player again now and Just made a account on this place Just to comment here... Im out of words... Never have i ever cried on a erotic VN... Im waiting more for the story instead of the sex scenes... Never expected that past for MC and Emy and i Just loved... It hit me hard... I really really Hope they get together soon... Better than Aine, she deserve more than any of the girls... I Will stop playing the game... I'll wait until there are more uptades or the game os finished... Thank you from this amazing and loving game!!! From a random Fan
Hello Niichan , I just want to tell you how much I love this game, and I really love Gwen's story and everything related to her is just perfect, can i ask if there is possible a single good ending with just her ?? or i have to follow the other paths as well to have a good ending ?
AHHHHHHH hello Niichan I LOVE YOUR GAME SO MUCH, the characters, the plot... PERFECTION!!!..... PLS Niichan make " Moon " One of the main girls pls pls pls pls!!!.... And i'm so exited for episode 7 AHHHHH the ending of episode 6 gave me a big cliffhanger!!!!!
And pls make Moon one of the main girls pls Niichan!! She's so badass!!!!!
If your talking Chapter 6 yes I know I have completed that, however there was an update like 3-4 days ago was that for like other systems or was that new content for chapter 6 or was it a peek into chapter 7..., I really don't want to play all the chapters again to find out there is nothing new. Thanks for your reply though.
so I am assuming that is what the update was for - the trouble with the mega link and not an update of content if so thanks and can't wait for a chapter 7+ lol great work btw
so i just played thru this start to current finish and tbh, i did not expect much from this at all. Boy, was i fucking surprised.
ive played many an ecchi vn, but this one really got to me. i smell some serious potential here and its got all the right (if somewhat clichéd) elements to be a great VN. I actually ended up not saving once because i was so pulled in, but i honestly dont regret that. this game imo needs the "wait till its done" treatment, cuz u want the impact of the story in one go. all the story beats hit the right spots, and i damn near teared up at a few points. the use of the bgm is genius as well, each song fits each situation almost perfectly. if u like jazzy dubstep/techno then there are a lot of nice tracks in this one, to the point where im curious if the dev would ever be interested in releasing a soundtrack (or linking artists if he didnt make the music himself). All in all, i love it so far. like i legitimately love it, for me at least it hits all the right spots for a game of this type to be entertaining
Dev, a job very well done on this project right here, and i cannot wait to see what you got next. im honestly gonna try to hold out for a bunch of updates, cuz i have to start the game all over again since my dumbass didnt save once XD keep up the amazing work
You sir are awesome lol. How often do u update the game? Just a ballpark is fine. And I only put down what I honestly thought, u made something that deserves the praise it gets and more. Unfinished as it may be, it's better than the vast majority of games of this type. I have high hopes for the future :)
I release updates when they're ready, I don't tend to give a specific date. But they're usually all done in a month, the last one took two months though. I might continue doing bigger updates as I get comfortable with it.
This game is awesome. This is one of my favorite games out of all the visual novel games I've played. You're doing great, keep up the good work. Thank you for making this great game and I hope you continue to develop other great games like this or even better in the future.
If you download on phone, first don't run it in background, or it'll keep crashing down or uploading very slowly. Then I found everytime when it's building the file, you should go back and re-login... It's a bug I think :)
Hello Dev!!
Thanks for this awesome masterpiece, I just wanted to ask that is it just me or is Hera the one who is suffering the most, like she is doing everything for the sake of her daughters and friends and knows that even doing them good will turn her bad but still decided too.
(p.s i haven’t completed ch.6 yet)
*Edited
I just Completed the game and I have a strong feeling that Hera is the real victim here and this so called anti-hera company is gonna bite back the guys when they will realize the sacrifice she had to made in order to protect them from upcoming dangers or circumstances she faced and now she doesn’t want them to experience it or so I think, It sure will be worth the wait for the new update. Keep up the good work.
Hi there. This game exceeds my expectations i love it I'm looking forward for more episode. Currently, I'm experiencing some errors after I installed it on my android. While playing for about more than a minute or tapping the skip button, the game keep closing and brings me back in my home screen unexpectedly. Sorry for my bad english
he does seem a little simpy, but after hearing the backstories of the girls involved i cant say i blame him. but then again im a sucker for these tragic backstory redemption type plots
I just finished the new chapter and it's so so so good even thought it it made me so confused af and excited to the next chapter so please I don't wanna rush you but please don't keep us waiting for too long
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This game is one of the best that I have played in a while. But come on man, not the heart strings. MC think of Sky more. But in all seriousness this game has been fantastic. The animation is great the storyline is great and I can't wait for the seventh episode. (I started at 9:00 at night and it is now 2:35 in the morning, I got addicted fast.)
Tried two times to play it... just had to stop. The guy is such a smart ass. Does it get better ? If not, i'm not able to continue.
what do you mean smart ass?
Some of the story later on will do more than tug at your heartstrings, it will straight tie them to the back of a racecar and floor it. Few games have actually managed to hit me right in the feels, but this one does a damned good job of it.
Now i know what the problem is. Especially at the beginning his "thoughts" are an exposition dump. And the way all charakters talk, feels very unnatural. I don't know anyone, who talks like that (and thinks like that... but i can't read minds, so who knows ;P). Both these points made him look like a "smart ass". Overanalyzing everything and talking/ giving advice in a very formal manner.
But in episode 2 it get's better, because the amount of exposition is reduced. I'm in Episode 3 now and it gets interesting now.
My suggestions on how to fix these problems (by someone who has never written anything... ;P):
1. Let them talk more casual.
2. Reduce "exposition thoughts". A rule in movies is "show, don't tell". Since this is a "visual" novell, it should be possible. I know, it's more work.
3. When characters are talking to each other, make thoughts shorter. Normal people do not have much time to analyze every detail when talking to someone.
4. Big thinking can happen when a character is alone.
But i will continue reading now, because i'm excited to see what these heartbreaking moments later are.
Thank you for playing, buddy.
I hate to say it, but I agree with you. Ep 1-2 or even 3 is pretty much my newbie days, apologies. Will try to fix the early episodes, when I have time. Might do some retouch on the renders while I'm at it.
Masters are made, not born. No reason to apologize. That's one of the reasons i gave it another try.
But maybe you can answer me two question: How long does rendering an image take? And what tool do you use? Blender?
I use Honey Select 2 and they only takes seconds depending on your PC.
plz just spoile this one thing Just this one!!! Dose this end in a polly type of thing or do i really have to pick one?
It's a harem game.
WOOOOOHH I LOVE YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH LMAO
You're welcome.
We have not just the build up, but there will be times where things will go down. All you need to do is trust your girls. It's a slice of life after all.
This games is great... And i noticed that the art styles is kind of similar to the eternum from caribdis :)
Btw this games will be in the second place for the storyline and the art style... The first place goes to once in a lifetime from caribdis not gonna lie :/
But Niichan you did great 10/10 bro
I need the rest emmy/emma thats genius.
yo, can anyone explain to me this trope in visual novels with "roommate" and "landlady"? I'm just reading these novels trying to understand which name I could use & would actually fit these situations the most. Is this some sort of legal thing?
Some games I've seen use "roommate" in place of "sister", and "landlady" in place of "mother" or "stepmother" in order to avoid being tagged as incest or to give players the choice. Most games that do this make sense either way you go, so it's really player preference.
another reason is because patreon has banned incest, so they basically replaced mother and sister to that.
ahhh now that makes sense. Mother / Sister seemed to fit the dialogue lore the best in these
first of all great game, second of all why do you have to tug on me heartstrings. but in all seriousness it's a great game with nice character and it definetly has potential so keep up the good work
It's great game and surprisingly heart warming. I hope it's harem by the end as I have real trouble picking who I love more between Aine, Freya, and Gwen. Really hoping Claire will be an option as well as the virgin warrior princess of my dreams. Really happy the protagonist got his Xiao pull in Genshin Impact too lol.
But what about sky?
She's great, and fun, and I love sisters... but Aine, Freya, and Gwen are just too much. Definitely want to keep the harem house though.
Hello Niichan! I'm a very big fan of your game! I played this game on the release of the Fifth episode... cuz till then I did not even know this game but I'm glad that I found it cuz the gameplay, story, pics, etc everything is awesome but I'm not able to save any game files in this 6th episode I was able to save files in the 5th episode but not in this 6th episode.
Also, no file is getting auto-saved and I can't see any option of "quick save" in the game but there is a quick save category in the game save menu and when I try to save, it just automatically gets closed and I have to start from the beginning so pls help me with this problem
P.S., I can't wait for the next episode and I'm so addicted to the game that I get mad (not in a bad way) that I have to play this game part by part and I was thinking that I will download the game when it is completed but it's just too irresistible.
🤣🤣🤣🤣
Guess what happened! My saves from the 5th episode just got synced into the 6th episode and I'm able to save rn!
Now I just wish that the relationship with sky and others just doesn't fall apart in the coming episodes
Hello Niichan! Im a big fan of your work... I played this game on the release of the First episode... I stopped at the third and player again now and Just made a account on this place Just to comment here... Im out of words... Never have i ever cried on a erotic VN... Im waiting more for the story instead of the sex scenes... Never expected that past for MC and Emy and i Just loved... It hit me hard... I really really Hope they get together soon... Better than Aine, she deserve more than any of the girls... I Will stop playing the game... I'll wait until there are more uptades or the game os finished... Thank you from this amazing and loving game!!! From a random Fan
yo i feel you man!!
Hello Niichan , I just want to tell you how much I love this game, and I really love Gwen's story and everything related to her is just perfect, can i ask if there is possible a single good ending with just her ?? or i have to follow the other paths as well to have a good ending ?
Solo ending's are a thing. You'll just have to wait when each character's routes will get implemented.
AHHHHHHH hello Niichan I LOVE YOUR GAME SO MUCH, the characters, the plot... PERFECTION!!!..... PLS Niichan make " Moon " One of the main girls pls pls pls pls!!!.... And i'm so exited for episode 7 AHHHHH the ending of episode 6 gave me a big cliffhanger!!!!!
And pls make Moon one of the main girls pls Niichan!! She's so badass!!!!!
Thank you Niichan for making this game......
Hi NiiChan, I'm happy to play your game. I expect new updates and new games from you.
I will follow and support what you do <3
From Vietnam with love <3
I cried when I saw the past of Emy. You did a great job <3
Episode 4 has injured me. Never have I actually felt sad like I was watching a movie while playing an eroge game, 12/10
So the update was not a story update? I don't want to play through to just find out that it ends at the same place as last time I played - thanks?
There was a lot of story in the new chapter
If your talking Chapter 6 yes I know I have completed that, however there was an update like 3-4 days ago was that for like other systems or was that new content for chapter 6 or was it a peek into chapter 7..., I really don't want to play all the chapters again to find out there is nothing new. Thanks for your reply though.
so I am assuming that is what the update was for - the trouble with the mega link and not an update of content if so thanks and can't wait for a chapter 7+ lol great work btw
so i just played thru this start to current finish and tbh, i did not expect much from this at all. Boy, was i fucking surprised.
ive played many an ecchi vn, but this one really got to me. i smell some serious potential here and its got all the right (if somewhat clichéd) elements to be a great VN. I actually ended up not saving once because i was so pulled in, but i honestly dont regret that. this game imo needs the "wait till its done" treatment, cuz u want the impact of the story in one go. all the story beats hit the right spots, and i damn near teared up at a few points. the use of the bgm is genius as well, each song fits each situation almost perfectly. if u like jazzy dubstep/techno then there are a lot of nice tracks in this one, to the point where im curious if the dev would ever be interested in releasing a soundtrack (or linking artists if he didnt make the music himself). All in all, i love it so far. like i legitimately love it, for me at least it hits all the right spots for a game of this type to be entertaining
Dev, a job very well done on this project right here, and i cannot wait to see what you got next. im honestly gonna try to hold out for a bunch of updates, cuz i have to start the game all over again since my dumbass didnt save once XD keep up the amazing work
Thank you for the feedback!
If you are interested with the soundtracks I'm using, there's a person posting them on Youtube.
You sir are awesome lol. How often do u update the game? Just a ballpark is fine. And I only put down what I honestly thought, u made something that deserves the praise it gets and more. Unfinished as it may be, it's better than the vast majority of games of this type. I have high hopes for the future :)
I release updates when they're ready, I don't tend to give a specific date. But they're usually all done in a month, the last one took two months though. I might continue doing bigger updates as I get comfortable with it.
Got it, I'll keep an eye out. Already following. Keep up the awesome work man
Dude this game's reference might be Masamune-kun's Revenge
I saw many similarities in a few minutes of gameplay
What was just updated yesterday? Site or Game?
site
This game is awesome. This is one of my favorite games out of all the visual novel games I've played. You're doing great, keep up the good work. Thank you for making this great game and I hope you continue to develop other great games like this or even better in the future.
Great game. The Emy episode was very good. I hope new episodes soon.
For those who are having trouble with MEGA, I've added an Itch link.
Mega download page keeps crashing down, I can't download the game! Any suggestions???
Try one of the mirror links on the patreon page.
https://www.patreon.com/posts/my-bully-is-my-6-59113151
If you download on phone, first don't run it in background, or it'll keep crashing down or uploading very slowly. Then I found everytime when it's building the file, you should go back and re-login... It's a bug I think :)
wait u mean the page on the web or app?
The game keep crashing in Samsung A11 after the last update. Is anyone here has the same issue?
A11 breaks most games on here. Its not a game issue its a Renpy/A11 issue.
Hello Dev!! Thanks for this awesome masterpiece, I just wanted to ask that is it just me or is Hera the one who is suffering the most, like she is doing everything for the sake of her daughters and friends and knows that even doing them good will turn her bad but still decided too.
(p.s i haven’t completed ch.6 yet)
*Edited
I just Completed the game and I have a strong feeling that Hera is the real victim here and this so called anti-hera company is gonna bite back the guys when they will realize the sacrifice she had to made in order to protect them from upcoming dangers or circumstances she faced and now she doesn’t want them to experience it or so I think, It sure will be worth the wait for the new update. Keep up the good work.
Are all the anti-Hera girls (Jess, Aurora, etc) the harem girls from the other game?
Yup... Thats why Jess is pregnant in this game
Hi there. This game exceeds my expectations i love it I'm looking forward for more episode. Currently, I'm experiencing some errors after I installed it on my android. While playing for about more than a minute or tapping the skip button, the game keep closing and brings me back in my home screen unexpectedly. Sorry for my bad english
I tried clear cache, data, and force stop. I also reinstalled the app. Should I download it again?
he does seem a little simpy, but after hearing the backstories of the girls involved i cant say i blame him. but then again im a sucker for these tragic backstory redemption type plots
A story I wasn't expecting but so well written and animated, this game is one my favorites! Truly invested in this story
I just finished the new chapter and it's so so so good even thought it it made me so confused af and excited to the next chapter so please I don't wanna rush you but please don't keep us waiting for too long
Man this was soo good, first time playing it and I'm already invested on the story, keep up the good work!
Not even finished with Ep. 6 yet but the reference to Eternum is by far the best thing I've ever seen. Nice one!
You do a lot of good work for such short release windows, keep it up my dude
Sheeeeeeeeesh XD
When will episode 7 arrive?
If you take a quick look at the update releases in the dev logs above, it seems NiiChan attempts to get an update out every couple of months.
Not gonna lie, i laughed so hard at the one punch man reference when the MC explained to Aine how he got fit🤣🤣
same i yelled the workout routine as saitama would XD
Oh yhhh this just keeps getting better and better cant wait for ep7 😁
The links are back. There was a bug in the game that we had to take down the links temporarily. It's all fixed now and ready to go.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
download link doesnt work
Не загружается (((
The file you are trying to download no longer exists.
Yh im having the same problem so whats up with that 😢